專題01 感謝信

1. 我寫信想向你表達我對你慷慨相助的感激之情.（開篇點題）

I'm writing to extend/express/convey my gratitude to you for your generous help.

2. 是你慷慨的幫助讓我得到這個好機會。（強調句）

It is your generous help that enables me to obtain this splendid opportunity.

3. 是你的好客和幫助讓我的旅行變得很有意義和收獲。（強調句）

It was your hospitality and great help that made my journey fruitful and worthwhile.

4. 希望你方便的時候能到XX來玩。（邀請對方作為回報）

I really hope you can come to XX for a visit when it is convenient for you.

5. 對于你的關心與付出，我再次表達真摯的感謝，并永生難忘。（結尾再次感謝）

Thanks again. Please accept my sincere thanks for your caring and efforts, which I will never forget.

Dear ________,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ________(感謝的原因).

If it had not been for your assistance in ________(對方給你的具體幫助), I fear that I would have been ________(沒有對方幫助的后果).

2019.6月 6浙江

假定你是李華，經常幫助你學習英語的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國家。請給他寫一封郵件，內容包括：1. 表示感謝；2. 回顧Alex對你的幫助；3. 臨別祝愿。

高分習作1：

Dear Alex,

I am extremely grateful for your generous help with my English.

Our time spent together in China has been so delightful! I vividly remember your patient attitude at our awkward first meeting when I struggled even with the most basic dialogues. Your continuous encouragements helped me get out of my comfort zone and speak in English with increasing confidence. Thanks to you, my progress was so rapid that even my teacher at school praised me on my improvements.

I wish you plenty of pleasure in your life at home.

Yours,

Li Hua

高分習作2：

Dear Alex,

I want to acknowledge(感謝) you of your help to hone(訓練技能) my English during your stay in China.

I appreciate the patience and dedication you have committed into converting(轉化) complex connotation(含義) of certain vocabulary into comprehensible(可理解的) ideas for me. Such professionalism(專業精神) and tact(策略) in the mastery of the language can help me with the potential of pursuing the field of second-language acquisition(二語習得). Had I spent my time with any other foreign friend, my improvement might not have been as great.

I wish you the best with all your endeavors(努力).

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

（1）假設你是李華,現在你正在高考考場上,場下你的父母正殷切期待著你。中學生活即將結束,在這個特殊時刻,請你按以下內容要點給自己的父母寫一封感謝信內容要點：

1、感謝父母多年來,特別是高三這一年來無微不至的關懷。

2、自己近期學習一直十分刻苦,進步不小。這次高考考試也都很順利,發揮出了自己的水平,希望父母放心。

3、高考之后一定多幫父母做些家務,還要讓父母品嘗一下自己親手做的菜。

注意：1.詞數100字左右 2.可適當增加細節，使行文連貫。

【參考范文】

Dear parents,

Now I know clearly that you both are expecting me anxiously. I can say nothing but thanks to you both on this special occasion, because words have failed me when I want to express my thanks to you both for the loving care you have shown for me, especially since I went to Senior Three. These days I have been studying hard and have made some progress. And everything has got along well with my college entrance examination. I have performed my ability in this exam. I hope you both can set your mind at rest.

After this exam, I intend to help you do some housework which I have seldom done before. And I also mean to learn to cook in order to prepare a dinner for you both in person.

My dear parents, everything is going on well with me and do have a rest!

Best wishes

Yours, Li Hua

（2）假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓，一直通過有關網站關注三年前在美國圣迭哥動物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”。現在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據以下要點給動物園工作人員寫一封信：

1.自我介紹； 2.祝賀蘇琳生日； 3.感謝工作人員； 4.索取蘇琳三歲生日照。

注意：1.詞數100左右。 2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫； 3.開頭語已為你寫好。

【參考范文】

Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings from China!

I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago, I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

（3）假定你是李華。你們學校和一所美國中學簽署了教師交流協議。在過去的一年里，你們的英文老師是來自這所中學的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美國任教。請你根據寫作要點和要求給Sue寫封電子郵件。

寫作要點： 1.對她表達感謝之意; 2.介紹她離開后你自己及班里發生的事情; 3.希望了解她的近況。

注意：1.詞數100左右。 2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫； 3.開頭語已為你寫好。

【參考范文】

Dear Sue, I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China. It’s almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us. We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood? How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch. All the best.

Yours,

Li Hua

（4）假定你是李華，David 是你的美國筆友。他對中國鼓勵使用環保購物袋很感興趣，來信向你詢問此事。請你給他寫封回信。主要內容如下：1.感謝他的關注。 2.簡要介紹相關情況。 3.談談你的感想。

注意：1.詞數100左右。 2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

參考詞匯：環保購物袋 environment-friendly shopping bag；關注 concern.

【參考范文】

Dear David,

I’m glad that you’ve noticed our efforts on environmental protection. Thank you for your concern.

As too much use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution, our government encourages us to use environment-friendly shopping bags. These bags are made of a variety of material that can be easily treated when they become rubbish. Besides, they can be reused. More and more people in China have realized the advantages of such bags and started using them.

I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags can greatly improve our environment. This is one of the many steps we are taking to make our country an even cleaner place.

Yours,

Li Hua

（5）據最新調查顯示,中國長江江豚(finless porpoise)受人類活動影響而瀕臨滅絕,目前總數不足1 000只。假設你是來自重慶的李華,請用英文給WWF(世界自然保護基金組織)寫一封信,請他們關注這一狀況并提供幫助。內容應包括:

1.說明寫信目的;

2.簡述江豚現狀;

3.希望WWF如何幫助(比如:資助江豚保護項目等)

4.表示感謝并期待回復。

注意:1.詞數80左右;

2.書信格式及開頭已給出(不計入總詞數)。

【范文體驗】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m a student from Chongqing, China. I’m writing to inform you that finless porpoises in China are faced with a severe situation presently.①　　　　　　　　　　(正是由于人類的活動) finless porpoises are endangered.②　　　　　　　　(令人吃驚的是) there are merely less than 1,000 finless porpoises living in China. Thus,③　　　　　　　　　　　　(到了該立刻采取措施的時候了).

We sincerely hope that WWF can give us some advice on how to protect this endangered species and a sponsorship will be of great help.

Thank you for your attention and I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

要點表達

(1)正是由于人類的活動使得江豚瀕臨滅絕。

They are under threats of human activities and as a result,finless porpoises are endangered.

=It’s because of human activities that finless porpoises are endangered.

(2)令人吃驚的是存活在中國的江豚不超過1 000只了。

There are merely less than 1,000 finless porpoises living in China.It’s amazing.

=It’s amazing that there are merely less than 1,000 finless porpoises living in China.

(3)到了該立刻采取措施的時候了。

It is time to take measures at once.

=It’s high time that immediate measures should be taken.

(4)我們真誠地希望WWF能在如何保護瀕臨滅絕動物方面給我們一些建議。

We sincerely hope to get some advice from WWF on how to protect this endangered species.

=We sincerely hope that WWF can give us some advice on how to protect this endangered species.

【金麗衢十二校2020高三第一次聯考】

【寫作提示】

1此項寫作任務是給曾經服務、幫助過自己的英國導游寫一封感謝郵件,語氣應親切、真誠、熱烈

2.開頭段應點明自己曾接受過對方服務和幫助的時空背景(when and where),以便對方能迅速了解你的身份和意圖。3.第一個要點中的“美好時光”和第二個要點中的“困難和幫助”應有具體的內容，不可用抽象名詞詞組“happy moments和“difficulties and assistance來一語帶過。

【參考范文】

Dear Mr. Smith,

I'm writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your help while I was traveling in the UK during the summer vacation. It was your detailed and humorous introduction that enabled me to have a deeper insight into British culture and have a wonderful time there. I am also deeply impressed by your sincere help to get me some medicine when I caught a cold and your perfect advice about choosing souvenirs for my family.

Thanks again for all your efforts! I'm wondering if you'd like to visit my hometown in China, where you'll be exposed to the brilliant Chinese culture. I'll be your guide this time!

Yours,

Li Hua

【高分語言結構】

1.高級詞匯 heartfelt gratitude衷心感謝 have deeper insight into對…有更深入的了解 deeply impressed by深深感動于,對…有深刻的好印象 souvenir.紀念品be exposed to親身體驗 brilliant ad絕妙的

2.高級句式 It was your detailed and humorous introductio that enabled me to have deeper insight into British culture and have wonderful time there.( It was...that.為強調句) I'm wondering if you'd like to visit my hometown in China. where you'll be exposed to the brilliant Chinese culture. if賓語從句 where引導非限制性定語從句)

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